Sakura and Shaoran

I really like the mood of the picture.
Its seems to convey a very intimate moment of those two. The characters by CLAMP are highly recognizable, since eyes and heads are pretty much of the original style.

The soft splattered white-out works wonderfully over the strong colours. It indicates snow and that adds up to the winterclothes.
Its not neccessary, merely a suggestion but having some blush on Sakura would support the winter sensation even more.

Both characters are very close too eachother, well done with keeping their headsizes in similar sizes. I also love how the partnerlook outfit makes this piece even more harmonic, still Sakura's dress looks very feminine and Shaolan's very boyish, the chosen colours underline this. What I definately miss are shadows, especially since there is a given lightsource in the center of the image(especially on the back of their hands and under the chin). The hair could use some shading aswell. Drapery is simplificated but I find it very appropriate.

The angled arm of Shaolan seem slightly too short in comparison to that of Sakura's who stands a little farther away from us even.

There is a streak of hair directly falling into the star's outline - making this streak a bit lighter due to the star's light would underline the stars shining.